

The second composition represented here was a large jump forward, while being able to rapidly illustrate my thought process onto the screen. I just used the pen tool to draw the shapes onto the grid and this proved to be much more productive. This composition had more direction than the one before but still contained the random shapes that ruined my first try. With the critiques of widening my border and puting more thought to the representation of my word the second composition contained thick arrows that cut through the black space. These arrows entered from the outside and broke up the rigid border, which was not suitable for such a word. The relation between the shapes still needed some development.

The final composition drawn onto Photoshop took all of the critiques, including the balance of black and white, the further widening of the border, and the elimination of the focal points. Along with the remedy of these problems, I decided to add color to the major diagonals that give motion to the composition. The coloring was achieved by using the select tool and then adding the right hue to the different shapes that I felt completed the rotation and gave this composition its aggressive nature. In this final try, the arrows are mostly implied and therefore relate to each other without becoming individually noticeable. The border was separated at the points where the flow of the composition exited and entered. This has become the basis for my final drawing composition in ENDS 106.
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